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Re: Finding me back-Prologue(Final edit) Please re -read
So hi all, [color=#BF00BF] I woke up from this nightmare which formed a very much part of my existence now, since they had left. I was gasping for breath. Although ...
Mar 1, 2010 -
Re: Dangerous, Dirty Secret-Part 3
When I feel myself waking, my mind is in a fog. As if the deep mist has fallen over it, clouding, and making it hard for my thoughts, my memories, ...
Mar 1, 2010 -
Re: PRIUS
Okay, I was trying to edit this until I got to the part where she "profiles" her friends, and then I stopped. I'm pretty sure you want this to be ...
Mar 1, 2010 -
Re: Dangerous, Dirty Secret-Part 2
I didn't think to part any of the tree branches or thorn covered vines
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: The Diary of Sara Jacobs- Chapter 1
Hi peoples! This is my first story, so please be HARSH! =P Thankies! :elephant: Here's me being HARSH. (comments in bold) Kat paused, her Mrs. Maclane
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter One (rated 12+ for fantasy and violence)
My comments are in BOLD I deleted anything I didn't edit to save space. His feet felt much too clumsy and big for him, but he wasn’t sure if it ...
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: Mistia's Terror (rated 12+ for mention of violence)
My comments are in BOLD "Mistia, you can see him now." Mistia looked up from her seat and stared at the nurse, searching for something on the nurse's face to ...
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: Dangerous, Dirty Secret
My comments are in bold She looks at me and giggles. I stare back with one eyebrow raised. “What’s so funny?” I ask, noticing my voice rose. I calm myself. ...
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: Why did we go on the Wrong Plane Part 1
My comments are in blod "What all are you planning to take with you to the New york trip?"Betty asked her friend,Ashley. "I will be taking my cool dresses and ...
Feb 26, 2010