-
Re: Alvalor
I loved it! I know I can relate to Will because I have difficulties continuing conversations and always have my nose buried in a book instead of visiting and going ...
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: 5 Tips for Breaking Writer's Block
Hey thanks for these! I'm going to have to try em out! I always get writers block and it takes me forever to get back on track! Thanks!
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: Auburn Queen chapter 1 and 2
I have to agree with the others, it was quite fast paced. Jaclyn took it all with really no questions at all and it seemed that she sort of knew ...
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: Crystal Valley Part II
Hey thank-you so much for those! And I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'll take your advice and make those changes. Now that you pointed those little pieces, they don't really ...
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: Crystal Valley
Hey thanks. I know I gotta work on the beginning and feel free to give me tips on how to do that. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Nov 13, 2008 -
Re: All my love
I really liked this. I'm not an overly big fan of poetry, but I really liked this one. There was just something about it that I can't quite put my ...
Nov 13, 2008 -
Re: Crystal Valley Part II
Max sat in the wagon beside her pets, the sun high in the sky. Epona pranced happily down the road, Cackle sung in his dragon voice and Malto lay sleeping ...
Nov 13, 2008 -
Re: Crystal Valley
Well, Havi is quite a nag and Galada is an irattating person. I wasn't trying to make the reader feel sorry for Max, it was merely a way to get ...
Nov 13, 2008 -
Re: Crystal Valley
This story really has no chapters just yet. I thought I'd deal with all that when I finished. So feel free to criticize it. Thank-you! :lol:
Nov 12, 2008 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Howdy! I really do hope I enjoy this place. It's the first I've been to My name is Wanderer777, I guess I could start off with that. Hope I could ...
Nov 12, 2008 -
Re: Crystal Valley
“Maxenne, go take the fish up to town. You shouldn’t always have to be told. Once a week, that’s all we ask of you,” Havi ordered her daughter from the ...
Nov 12, 2008
