Wanderer777

I'm not at all pleased with what I'm writing (especially this part...it's so boring to me) so please tell me if it sounds good. And I hope it isn't too ...

It was great! I usually say that with everyone's stories but only because I enjoy them thoroughly! aloe practically caught everything so there really is no need for me to ...

I'm enjoying your story greatly! I didn't find this part confusing...I don't think lol. I'm sure everything will be explained in the parts to come. Please keep up the good ...

I love your stories. I just found these today but whatever they're great! But I just want to say one thing: I'm from Alberta and I never knew we Canadian's ...

I had a little difficulties in writing the scene with Fanor. To me it seems a little...stiff I guess. And right after the bar fight seemed blah, but that's my ...

I loved it! It was fantastic. Of course I did get a wee bit confused with all those names but I didn't have difficulties pronouncing them. I have quite a ...

Oh I so loved it! The way you twisted the whole Cinderalla sory about,. It is now my fav out of all the fairy tales. And believe me, I've seen ...

Loved it! This was a great piece of work and I loved the humour in it. I can't wait for the rest to be posted! Please, hurry and write it!

I didn't say specifcally that there was only 17 in existence. Just 17 dragons left at Crystal Valley, at least I think I did. Maybe I made a mistake on ...

Hey thanks! I actually didn't catch that first mistake and now that you mention the others...I'll fix those as soon before I forget. I'm glad you like it!

“Someone catch that horse!” Max shouted at the top her voice. “He’s heading for the beach!” She pretended to run out of breath and stopped, stifling a laugh as she ...

I loved it! I'm not really great with the crit part but I can tell you that I didn't find anything wrong with it and also, keep up the good ...

Loved it! You're better than my sister (who I get her to do my poetry for English shh). I like your poems, please write more. :)

“Fish day! Wake up sleepies!” Max called, bounding happily into her room and opening the window. It was a couple of weeks later and Max had finally saved up enough ...

Okay, a Lang is a race created by the evil wizard Kahul who lives in the desert. As a reader, you will learn more about Kahul later on it the ...