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Well for the most part I liked this, and I'm sure you kind of just went on a writing rant, which i enjoy doing a lot myself, but my parts ...

I really liked this so far! :) I definitely like the first person point of view, but I think it's even better how you make it seem like the reader ...

Thank you :)

I wrote this for my English class, but I really enjoyed writing it, and it was really the only non-essay thing we did in that class so I was pretty ...

I definitely liked the whole symbolism of the snowglobe and how they feel also fits in with the season :P But I also adored the line "The answer was never ...

I think this was quite the cute poem! And honestly, this totally describes me and my best friend XD Although to go with the post above me you could either ...

Very intriguing story. One grammar thing I'd like to point out is there shouldn't be a comma before "I use as a purse" that threw me off for a second. ...

Excellent paper! While I was reading the short stories, many of the specific quotes I felt were important you incorporated into your paper, and you seemed to pick up on ...

I appreciate when people are honest. So thank you for the tips, but I really have no interest in continuing writing poetry, or trying to fix this one. Thanks for ...

oh thank you :) I generally don't write poems, but I had some writers block for my usual project so I wrote this XD

Uncharted thoughts swirl in my head While blank pages stare me down. My pen takes a beating As I vent my anger on its cap Though my eraser look on ...