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Nice poem. Like someone said the third line was a little forced. Youve tryed to rhyme quite hard and you have lost some meaning. However if you think about the ...

Nice structure, nice words and nice over all poem. What else can you say but QUALITY!!!!!!!! A minor thing at the start you say "I can never remember, flying overhead ...

Um yea hey. I'm from victoria australia, male, straight, like basketball, and aussie rules football, green day and writing (duh). Um started writing, uhhhh well never but i got third ...