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Good job although I spotted a grammar mistake: I won't love you forever. I'd rather love you today, praying to God(.) He (he) allows me to love you tomorrow as ...

Probably Luna Lovegood, although it's just too bad she didn't go after anyone. The poem is sort of good, although it's not really much to go on if someone were ...

I can't help but think you made that idea based upon my title xD But good job, I like your entry... it portrays what shallow people are into and don't ...

I think you should probably improve your chapter titles... they are a little long and I feel like this chapter title doesn't relate to what is going on... I would ...

Good chapter, although it still has the same problem as the last chapter... not enough description in their surroundings. I'm starting to quite enjoy this book I'd find it fascinating ...

What would you prefer? Insomniac Joyriding Vampires? Or Bloodthirsty Joyriding Maniacs? XD I like how it begins however, I feel like it's kinda unclear of where they are... one minute ...