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I used to be like that. I couldn't concentrate at all when I started to write my chapters, usually ditching the idea in the first couple of minutes. Now that ...

Advanced Critique in the Fantasy forum? :O For every paragraph/sentance I thought felt awkward, or worded weirdly, a wrote a comment in or underneath it. The fonts aren't working for ...

There you go. il your plot sounds pretty interesting, the whole story started to feel a bit band because of your lackluster, and in many places, nonexistance descriptions of people/places. ...

The Maximum Ride series. I swear, his writing style is a dumbed down HP minus the captivating characters/plot. The narrator Max constantly compares every over-the-top action scene "like it was ...

I was already really crazy about this other plot for this story (which I eventually dropped out of after numerous rewrites) at the time when I thought of it, but ...

You're story was alot more engaging than i'd expected, or up to a few plot points atleast. Miriam was very interesting with her powers of extreme perception. You sort of ...