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Re: Best way to write a horror story?
Never reveal too much in one go. Make subtle references to build up tension (noises, shadows etc.). Take it slow & don't just convey emotion by "He was scared" but ...
Jan 15, 2008 -
Re: Virulence #2
This piece has currently been taken down for reasons deemed suitable by the author.
Jan 14, 2008 -
Re: Running!
I run, but I'm a sprinter, so I don't really listen to music, can't get enough inspiration from music in less than 10 seconds. :D
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Virulence #1
Thanks (Y)
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Moving topics from one place to another
Thanks very much!
Jan 10, 2008 -
Re: Moving topics from one place to another
I have posted one piece of fiction into the "Other Fiction Forum", however it has been bought to my attention that it would probably be better off in the Science-Fiction ...
Jan 10, 2008 -
Re: Waiting for the Dawn
Very good piece of writing. However, I disagree with the other reviews that say they didn't like Gred and Forge. It was enough to make me chuckle, and seems to ...
Jan 10, 2008 -
Re: Writing Dialogue
Speech is a pain for me, I'm never sure what the correct thing to do is. Where do I stand on capitols, commas and periods? What happens when I use ...
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: Critique the Person Above You!
Gadi's - The Chains of Death
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: The Chains of Death
A silent yowl came from Joe, old, strong Joe, who had lived well after his tenth birthday, who had escaped death countless times. This sentence seems a little long and ...
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: Litten Tree
I liked that a lot. Conveyed the feeling of lonliness very well and was well written. A quick question, is this a reference to The Litten Tree in Bedford, England?
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: Music of the planets.
In thou's purest fom. Divine! I assume you meant to write "form"?
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: Mika
Mika's music makes my soul (and ears) hurt.
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: Anna
That was a very, very good story. However I would say that after three minutes I highly doubt a man would have become ashes. My guess would be a skeleton ...
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: I. Am. A newbie.
Yes, I am indeed a newbie. I'm not all too sure how this site works, so any help you be very very much appreciated :D I've read some really good ...
Jan 6, 2008
