W-Lupus

Please, please review this. It's a schoolwork and I need help with it. It's only aloud up to 3 pages so that's why it's not so detailed, but please help! ...

Nice work. As far as i know , I haven't seen werewolves used in this way. Plot wise , its sound , though i do think that the prologue could ...

Wow! I totally love this! My only question is what exactly does a werewolf look like? Other than that I think this is really wonderful. Good going! :smt003 :elephant: LOVE ...

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thanks Antigone Cadmus! nice to see someone who write about werwolves too , and cant tolerate twilight fan fiction. =) youve given me points to improve on , which i ...

the plot is developing well but things like grammar can let you down a bit. The story flows nicely as it is , but i think it would be even ...

nice - very good descriptions. initial setting of the scene and introductio of the main character was smooth.

here is the edit. She died in my arms. Memories have two sides, one pleasant, but the other can haunt us forever. I couldn't get her face out of my ...