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Re: Untitled
Wow, that was really good. I loved the imagery in the first stanza; it really caught my attention and made me want to keep reading. The last stanza as well ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: My master
I thought that was very creative. When I first started reading it, I thought that the master had died, so I am glad that you kept him alive!My only suggestion ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Sin
Wow, that was really good! I'm religious, and I think that you got the concept right on! I was not expecting you to turn it to Christ in the end, ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: What Do You Think?
Wow! That is really good! I love how much detail you put in it! It made it really easy to imagine. (By the way, I love the characterization! I have ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Imaginary: Part 1
Wow! This is a really good idea! I have never thought about an imaginary friend world! It's a good start, and the only suggestion I have for you is to ...
Jul 1, 2011