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Kills on contact is more of a poison thing. Hydrocholoric acid burns (strips paint), but sodium pentathol (I think that's the term) simulates a heart attack in the body and ...

According to search, you put number 5. :P

Ayn Rand had character in her book give a 60 page speech and it is hailed as one of the best works in existance. Deep thought does not mean that ...

Aww... but I want more details. That way it will be more suspenseful if you do a couple of twists. Kind of like Terminator, by fighting in the past they ...

Looks up at Kaliber and lols. Grammar issues? What about your spelling ones? It was a point though, the grammar is not too bad, but would need a little polishing ...

While interesting, the date and whole prophecy type of thing is overused, but the way you handled it was kinda cool. Definately do more on the actual story, rather then ...

Way too dialogue heavy this time. We know nothing about what your characters are like, but we know their attitudes. Might want to add the kind of descriptions done in ...

Was interesting, but not terribly exciting. It has the whole monster movie feel to it.

Forcing yourself to write a novel is not an easy thing. I would start to do an outline, choice scenes and words, then connect them all together. Who says you ...

3 is more cliche, but probably your soundest one. Thin bloods are always never happy, but are far from powerful. The guise under which they can perform activities is better. ...

Thieves usually don't have families if they are the elite, most are street criminals just trying to survive, but with the power and skill comes the fame. Perhaps he happens ...