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Re: A thousand ways to mix up my poetry
-The ways my mind works- Alberto I have a reason to believe, That you have lost these things, The way you felt for me so long ago. Each way I ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: I wish I could change the world
Great work! I really like the topic! Its very passive in a way to me. I really like how you did it like that! That inspires me to write about ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Depth
Good job! I really liked this piece. It might be the darkness in it? Well keep writing! never give up! Just some words in the poem I had to Also ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: ocean swells
It is pretty good for its length! good job!
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: An Evening Lullaby
Good job. I really like how it brings peace inside me. Keep the amazing job!
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: the unknown
I liked it. It had something ironic that I cannot explain. good job!
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: I wish I had a monkey ninja!
"Imperfection is perfect." -alberto
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Poem
"If She knew what He did." Written upon a grave, A thousand words written upon a face, How she lived with him so gracefully, How she became his everything, His ...
Jun 29, 2008
