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Re: These Rains
That was great! Your wording was superb, great job. In my opinion the only najor down fall here is the begining is hazy. I see glimpses of vibrant imagery but ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Come and Set me Free
Oh gee thanks guys! I didnt see that misspelling. Of course, you guys saw my mistakes. Thanks!
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: The Outcast:C2: Sunny Days
Well then. This is really good. I think the only agitating thing is the first part. The sun is repeated, and it dulls the opening. Otherwise its good. Keep me ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Come and Set me Free
Come and set me free. Learn to love forever. Let me come to you, And I will show you the way. Come and set me free, Find a friend in ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Tormented Thoughts in n Insane Girl's Brain
ALLAEEAAHHHOOOOOHHH! ALLAEEYUUUUHHHH! "I'm coming home, I'm coming home. Tell the world I'm coming home!" The sweetest whisper, the softest sound. A roaring thunder, crash to the ground. V "That's why
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: The Outcast:C1:I was Normal
You dont give yourself much credit. That was awesome. I know i should criticize, but for me, it was brilliant. The emotion was strong vespecially the image of being pried ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Two Out of Three
why? Just because. But.... why? How? Too hard to explain. I love you. That's not enough? T-too much. I don't deserve it. You're worth it. No. Just explain why, then. ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: M-I-M
That was actually really cool. I quite enjoyed it. My favorites are the third and last stanzas. I ghink the story you held was so ensnaringvthat it was easy to ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: Nephilim
*laughs shakily* my chest is aching really bad now. You two did really really great. I hope u guys win something, because it deserves nothing less.
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Do not click this.
Curiosity killed the cat. Satisfaction brought it back. There is a reason these words have been said, a reason you clicked here, infact. I laugh because you fell for it. ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Once You Were My Best Friend
You know that happened to me. Except the girl cut me off entirely.
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: In a Dream, In the World
In a dream I saw you, Dancing like flames in the wind. You came and you kissed me so soft and so sweet, I cared not if I lived again. ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: they all go marching
okay, lemme make this clear. THIS POEM IS NOT ORIGINAL it is a remix of the child nursury rhyme "the ants go marching" I do not know who actually wrote ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Is homosexuality a psychological disorder or is it inate?
of course we are born that way! my theory is that everyone is born wth no specified sexuality, and over time we just either adapt the average socially accepted sexuality, ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: If I Fall....
I agree with everythin. Above except I siuldnt change the line about laying more than wofds etc. Brilliant job.
Mar 31, 2011