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Re: twistfaint<3
Love it. I do. But what in the world is it about?
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Christmas Tree
*sniffles and stares at the ground* that, was so sad. You should try changing the rhyme scheme, t restricts the poem. But... good job anyways.
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Christmas Tree
*sniffles and stares at the ground* that, was so sad. You should try changing the rhyme scheme, t restricts the poem. But... good job anyways.
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Human Life
I think basic content is good, so im gonna go deeper. First lemme say you contradict yourself. Probably on purpose. Moving on. I disagree. We were indeed made to die. ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Human Life
I think basic content is good, so im gonna go deeper. First lemme say you contradict yourself. Probably on purpose. Moving on. I disagree. We were indeed made to die. ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Waves Across Sunset Boulevard
You know, i just went through this, and as i went through this, i sang it. This poem is PERFECT for a song. Really. Which means dont change anything, or ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: an old poem I found in my old diary
No much to review? You guys are just lazy. Okay: On an autumn breeze/ this makes them separated. Maybe try "with an" autumn must be capitalized. Red and gold flutter ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Stroll (With a Stranger)
Unique. I like it. But whats the subject??? I mean, it sounds Great. But i rally have no cle what this is about.
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Neurosis
Wait wait wait wait what. This is a really good poem ehte. But what is it about?
May 1, 2011 -
Re: cinnamon excuses for false urgencies
These are great! Fantastic. Phenominal! But might i suggest a type of index or footnotes for definitions???
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Misrepresented Guardians
Mixed emotions here. First : OH MAH GAWD THIS IS EPICCC!!!!!!!! emotional and mystical and its like WHAM! then SMASH! and so exciting and omg omg omg omg omg! Then ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Silent Deceit
Deff dont change it. Ive tried changing songs. It just screws it up. so im just layin down the facts here. You struggled in the beginning but as the song ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Rejection
"'Cuz why should I tell you how I feel/if you don't even care?" Favoritest lines ever!! Seriously that quote just about sums up the pain. Yep. Nitpicks: "How can you ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: There's a Decepticon on My Wall
XD oh man that is too funny! Decepticon? I would have never guessed. Brilliant work, really.
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: There's a Decepticon on My Wall
XD oh man that is too funny! Decepticon? I would have never guessed. Brilliant work, really.
Apr 30, 2011