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Dea Nana, I have always needed you. You guided me, you helped me to understand. You lifted me up when I forgot how to stand. You taught me how to ...

INSPIRED BY BEHINDTHEMASK AND HER AWESOME RANDOM COMMENTS I'm walking around, feeling so uncomfortable. Just wishing these jeans were a little adjustable. I got another wedgie, And I can't pull ...

I had you, once before. Once before, you were mine. We've been through everything. We've seen the best, we've seen the worst, and still we shine. I knew you, once ...

The ponly thing that bothered me was juliet. I mean, the entire thing is a letter to her parents about how she fell in love and pretended to die then ...

This is awesome sauce. Okay, in the begining, when you say the key twice, I think some punctuation of some sort needs to he put there to further separate them. ...

Jealous. Jealous. JEALOUS. The only thing I can draw are human-like figures. And you just mafe my pictures look terrible. Yes, you Re thaytgood. When you go binto specifics, you ...

I love this. Especially how the head is slightly disproportionate to the body. It emphasises th mythical reasoning. The little demon fey are quite original, and this is a very ...

When you screamed, I loved you. When you lied, I loved you. When you punished, I loved you. I still love you now. When you died, I loved you. You ...

"I want it to never end" not the greatest wording there. It is off. But that is the absolute only nitpick I have. You know at thirteen I still have ...

Agreed. Though, I would change ABSOLUTELY NOTHING. This is a poetic masterpiece. If you change it, I will gasp in terror, faint, ad then get back up so I could ...

Hmmm. Interesting. You used the words head andcore a bit too many times, and Im afraid I dont quite understand. But I dont have to. This is yours. It is ...

*laughs* *rereads* *laughs again* oh, anime, that is the most hilarious, clever, brilliantly wordef piece I have read in. aLOOONNNGGG time. Really you puled this off so smoothly I'm suprised ...

Yes, sir! I'll do the dishes, Though my eyelids are heavily laden With wishes of sleep. Right, sir! I mowed the lawn, As my legs almost gave out on me ...

Haha, I imagine the aftermath, she shows him the poem and goes, "and you wonder why I rejected you!! Selfish son of a-" hahahaha. This was thoroughly entertaining. Nothing like ...

If you read only the first lines, you get a shorter version. And the first letters of each last line spells WAIT PLEAS I hate trying to guess with you. ...