VousEsEtonnant

Contrary to most here, i think the repetitive "she" and "her" emphasizes how she is the center of your world. I like this poem because i can relate to it. ...

This poem is actually kind of amusing to me. I personally enjoy spiders, as well as snakes, but that is irrelavent. The one thing that confused me was your begining. ...

The flaws in this poem perfect it. I believe this was a very emotional bittersweet poem. I congradulate you

Dripping from my mouth, Splashing all around. I cover my lips with smeared fingers And I fall onto the ground. I can see the red, My now lethal words Soaked ...

If you love the words epic, ownage, or supercalifragalisticexbealladocious, we would be perfect friends! Come check me out, im a newbie! *mutters* i feel like im selling myself. XD

Bravo! You are amazing, or as i like to say, "vous es etonnant" the flow was a tad choppy at times, but nothing worth correcting. I enjoyed the part in ...

This was very humerous. I personally do not usually write in such an openly personal way, and so at times i was a bit wary to read some of these, ...

Well, i must say, it's impressive. Though the begining and end are alittle loose, the basic storyline takes perfect sensre and is quite interesting. When i finished reading i felt ...

I must disagree with everyone here. I think that when i read this poem, I was infact expecting more. But, upon reading it, i was blown away with understanding and ...

This poem is very relatable, but I'm afraid at times it seems to not follow through with itself. I like your play on words starting with a beam of light ...

BehindTheMask, you are correct, that was a spelling error I intend to fix. Thank you both for helping, because indeed i was struggling with some parts. Thanks again.

To strike the rage within, to rip it from my chest, would be to rip out my own heart For that's where it's at rest. I used to show my ...