VousEsEtonnant

Wow. This is dark stuff emotional, but dark. Some would say cliche emo, but I have felt that. It is far from cliche. You totally sum it all up here, ...

Thanks. I did not plan this one. The words were already there, I just needed to write them down.

Maybe I write of the pain because pain is all I feel. Maybe I put loss in words because my loss is real. When night pulls a curtain over the ...

Oop, I said numbness twice.

I love this poem! Its so relatable. -_- I hate it when people downplay emo. Come, look at my scars, try to put a sharp object to your skin and ...

*smiles alittle* i like this. I think that all these reviewers have good points, but they dont see the BIG PICTURE. I know what it is like to feel safe ...

I have dealt with this before, cutting myself. So, I think your message is beautifully thought out, but try not using rhyme next time. You will find it opens up ...

The sky seems to shine in a crysraline blue. The world is a live wire when I'm here with you. Time hides from me, but I do not care. forever ...

I was all "awwwe! We are so much like this!" Then i neared the end and went "what the hell?" Then "ohhh!" Funny how who it w- but nevermind, this ...

I love how you took death off of its mysterious murky pedastool and gave him a sense of humor. This is great!

Thanks bguys! I knew this poem was off, i just couldnt tell how. thanks for pointiing it all out

The sin. Blood reveals the sin. Does blood not symbolize life? Maybe the sin IS life.

*stares down at my cuts* *raises my tear-stained face* not enough words to describe how i feel right now. *lays on ground and stares at the sky with my scarred ...

When you get a short review, you know that you have done well. I assume this is a friend you speak to? It's quite bittersweet. Almost as if you are ...

This has such a nice lyric flow to it, I keep singing "play your piano, piano boy" (please excuse me if i go off on a personal tangent. I do ...