VousEsEtonnant

I dont find anything sarcastic or worth being sarcastic about. I think this is beautiful, graphic, but beautiful. Some people might cringe at reading this because of how it is, ...

I see serious potential (excuse misspellings) here. Try adding commas where the speakers would pause, but thats all I can offer.

Reach out and touch me. I'm real. Grab a knife and cut me. I'll heal. There's proof I exist, Now you see. Before you make judgements About me. I'll try ...

You evil little demon, You blackness in my brain. You are so very vile, So hideous, yet vain. Your teeth so sharp but craggly, Find purchase in my head. letting ...

I felt like you had stalked me and wrote down my life. :D great job!

Thrumming, tapping, the music starts to come. Spinning, falling, tugging at my heart and soul. I feel it racing through me, I hear it taking shape. A story in the ...

this is a very good poem.. only question would be, what is it that she knows? but otherwise, fantastic job, and keep writing!

JUST DONT SPREAD THE JELLY! Is that what you mean? Like, dont spread evil.

I believe in love. I believe in hope. I believe in beauty from the heart's point of view, not the eyes. I believe in expression of the soul, no matter ...

first of all, UH-MAY-ZING signature. i totally support lgbtq too. infact... i am one of them. but, entirely besides the point. okay, so, when i read this, I feel like ...

good point. would poeple worry so much about what we looked like if we couldnt see? i think not. good job.

I feel like this girl. That is a good thing. I mean, I've been in that situation many times, so it's easy to relate, but still. I like the emotion ...

duuuuuuuuuude........... Wow. honest? great great job.

That was fantablousness! I swear, I literally felt my heart speeding up. the tempo adds to that, the word choice, the structure.. it all played nicely into your emotional build ...

It was on the television. We were watching the newest episode of survivor, the people of the shelter and me. Then the whole screen went black, then an alarm went ...