Vonghese

Very nice, good family tension and overall suspense. I was a little disoriented till I read the spoiler, maybe you could mention the date somewhere early in the story? Just ...

Very nice, very well done! I could feel my heart rate rising as I read, always a sign of a good fight scene! I've seen far worse fight scenes in ...

Very funny. I have had to stand at attention for drill sergeants, and you nailed the sadistic tones perfectly. Very well written, you captured their language and attitude like you've ...