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Re: Chapter 4 (Unknown Title)
Who needs a body anyway? That was a good one :D Five minutes later, I was covered with an eerie red glow. Unnecessary details. Maybe you should try "Soon, I ...
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Re: Help Me
OH MY GODS. Just 'Oh my gods'. This is incredible. So much is unsaid, yet there's so much meaning. They're touching, they're moving, they get into your mind and play ...
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Re: Empty
This is a story I wrote several months ago, when my cat, Nei, had some leukemia tumors on his medulla oblongata. He received steroids, but there was a chance they ...
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Re: My friend was killed
This poem is something I came up one morning and it speaks about the value that's the most important to me: animal welfare. I used some harsh language and pictures ...
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Re: Newbie... and scared.
Mikko, Joe Walker, AVPM, AVPS, Voldemort, your location--I'm in love with you, girl :D I know the idea behind the harsh criticism, because I tend to do it myself XD ...
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Re: Newbie... and scared.
Thank you, Drama
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: False Impressions Hurt
My general impression: I LOVE IT. I'm always astonished by any art that carries a deeper message and acrostics are just great for this. The poem's vocabulary can be confusing ...
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: Newbie... and scared.
Mac, thank you for reassuring me! I've been welcomed here more warmly than anywhere else. Maybe except for my landlords when I was looking for lodgings, but hey: I pay ...
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: Newbie... and scared.
Hello there. I guess. Uhh, I'm not really good at introductions. My name's Eve, Volfness, Volfie, Iao, whatever floats your boat. I come from Poland, so even though I speak ...
Sep 8, 2011
