VoiceToBeHeard

Thank you guys all so much and I really appreciate your critiques. ps. Also, do not live through your writing... If this makes sense. Don't write about a "cooler" version ...

Can my character, Alexis, die of a heart attack after eating a large cheeseburger?

Thank you all for your amazing reviews. I really appreciated each and every one. I'm not going to give excuses for my piece and say that it was a mistake, ...

Very good. I'd really like to see shorter sentances and it a little more broken up. Pretty Crazy did a really good job, make sure you look their review over. ...

Joy Sauce and Evi, Thank you both so much! I'm so happy you guys liked it, and I can't wait to start editing. The process should be done in a ...