VoiceToBeHeard

Lydia Slightly red in the face, Lydia entered the classroom. She kept her eyes on the floor as she headed to a desk. Glancing over her shoulder, Lydia noticed a ...

Lydia The brisk October air tugged and played with Lydia Jayne's soft black hair as she swiftly strolled to school. Feeling relieved to be out of her house, she smiled ...

I'd like to reserve a spot for myself ;) Name: Lydia Jayne Age: 18 Appearance: Long black hair, brilliant green eyes, light brown complexion. 5'3" and slender. Personality: On the ...

When I saw this title, I couldn't wait to read it. Everyone made some great points. And I agree with most of them. Here are some things I think a ...

Hey Forestqueen808, I love your title, first off, it's what drew me in. Secondly, I have a personal attraction to stories like this. The only thing that I didn't really ...

Hey everyone! Second part. You can read the first part here: Hated - Part One ~~~~ Darkness. I was sure I had passed out, yet to my dismay, shooting pains ...

Hey Silversun :) I'm Rose, and I hope you don't mind that I post a few comments? Ok, so I liked your story idea, beautifully written. Quick question though. Is ...

These pictures are very good (atleast most of them :D ) I can't get over 7 tho. It's so awesome!!!! Love, love, love it. Keep up the good work!

Hey Borntoshop :) Rose here, and I really want to say that I love this piece. Short, yes, but descriptive. It's really beautiful. But I'd like to say that maybe ...

Hello Anima9, You have a nice piece here. A little short, but that can be fixed. The beginning sentences were a little long and confusing for me. Now I feel ...

Hey Spike71294, I really liked your story. Very sweet. Just three things I wanted to comment on. First, I really didn't understand the ending. What became clear? Second, it would ...

Hello Tapatia, First of all, let me say that I love the atmosphere of your story. Not too dark (like mine can be :? ) and not too happy. Plus, ...

Joy Sauce and Evi, Thank you both so much! I'm so happy you guys liked it, and I can't wait to start editing. The process should be done in a ...

I could hear him breathe passionate disgust in my ear, as the words, ‘I hate you‘ stung the side of my face, venom dripping off of each letter. His eyes ...