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Thank you guys all so much and I really appreciate your critiques. ps. Also, do not live through your writing... If this makes sense. Don't write about a "cooler" version ...

Okay, so I wrote this the other day, and I wanted to just put it here and see if anyone liked it. Don't worry about my feelings, rip this thing ...

Okay, so I wrote this the other day, and I wanted to just put it here and see if anyone liked it. Don't worry about my feelings, rip this thing ...

Dude! This is really unique :) at first I was like "what the heck is the next taylor doing on an internet dating site" but then I got it ;) ...

I really liked this :) Agreed, you did use 'yet' a little much at the end, but it wasn't too much for me... I love your flow in stitching one ...

Everyone made some great tips and points here. You know what I do? Write short stories. I usually make mine about twenty pages long. But sometimes I like the idea ...

Can my character, Alexis, die of a heart attack after eating a large cheeseburger?

Thank you all for your amazing reviews. I really appreciated each and every one. I'm not going to give excuses for my piece and say that it was a mistake, ...

It was last night. That horrible evening that I will never forget. Its claws scar my memory, and I shall always remember the terror that I felt. My intentions of ...

Andrew Perfect, Andrew let a few curse words slide under his breath, Spaz dude is back. "Drop it. What's the matter now?" The girl he almost hit grabbed James' arm. ...

Sounds good to me too ;) Andrew Andrew pulled up to school in his broken down truck that had graced him with starting. Living off his parents made life easier ...

So when do we start?

Here you go :) Name- Jaymie Carlson Age (12-15)- 14 Weapon - Bottle of Poison SASS - Healer Fears - Deeply fears the dark Physical Description- Personality- Jaymie has a ...

Reserve a spot for the healer and bottle of poison for a girl

I like this idea. So let me get this straight, we do a scene of our charater's getting murdered, then we start the day over again and find clues? But ...