VivielTwixt

There's not much I can say on improvements. I agree with the above reviewer. You stuck to your theme and did it well. I liked Mull. In many short stories ...

Thanks everyone for the comments. I wasn't taking this story too seriously as you can probably tell by the writing. And, yeah, it's a kid's story for the faerie children. ...

This is way too short. Too short to give an overall impression. The only thing I can comment on is the puppet-string thing. The puppet string controls the puppet, so ...

Gosh :D , dec.2? You're newer than I am. Of course I'm sticking around. I want to see this story through the entire process. I'm 17 too. Let's keep in ...