VivielTwixt

Thanks, I'll use this advice.

Dan stood frozen just staring at Alain. Inside hot blood rushed through his veins. "Just,chill. It's okay," she said trying to place her hand on his shoulder. He quickly stepped ...

Gosh :D , dec.2? You're newer than I am. Of course I'm sticking around. I want to see this story through the entire process. I'm 17 too. Let's keep in ...

I've only been on YWS for a month, but I already love this site and I hope to be on it for many years to come. I guess I'm freshman ...

I'll start off saying I'm new to YWS. I haven't done many reviews, so I may not be as helpful as other reviewers. I'll do my best anyway. And... I ...

I've read the prologue, Ch.1, and Ch.1 continuation. I think it will be easier if I rate them all at once here. The prologue rambles on about how heartbroken Karen ...

I love your style. The whole New York feel, the dialects, and the main character. You're really good at style. You should either replace the quote or revise the entire ...