VivielTwixt

Writers are always told "show don't tell". This story is one of the unique few where showing is not an issue. The story can using more telling though. I don't ...

Thanks everyone for the comments. I wasn't taking this story too seriously as you can probably tell by the writing. And, yeah, it's a kid's story for the faerie children. ...

Once upon a time, there was a queen and she was very beautiful and very wise. She knew her text well. “Do you remember the text?” asked the king. “Of ...

I gave him my life. He gave me his. It was a promise we made for then, now, and forever. Here standing side-by-side nothing else matters. Not our hectic past, ...

Sorry, people. Story Boot Camp has ended and is closed for the summer. For the people I've already helped, just PM me if you need further assistance on your stories. ...

It's done, Stelagineva. I'm closing, but if you have any questions about my review or need help, don't be afraid to PM me. I'll be happy to help.

You did a great job with your first chapter. It definitely catches my interest and makes me want to learn more. Writing Style I love the poem at the beginning ...

I'm open people.

Nice job, Skins. I like that you added a conflict with between Tori and Mr.Perfect. I also liked how you found a way to bring up the mystery of Oliver's ...

Sure, Skins. Don't worry, I'm not stalking you. Interesting, because I am stalking you. :shock:

500th Review? Yes!!!

No worries, Skins. It's already done. I read the other chapters, too, since they weren't too long. There's only one review though. A Shot of Arrogance has graduated and is ...

I've read the all of the chapters so I'll review the entire story I've read so far. Plot At the beginning of the story, I was bored. It sounded like ...

Chapter One Against the blackness flickered a single flame into existence. The only light to challenge the darkness, but still not enough. As if they had rehearsed, dozens of tiny ...

First off, I am not , I repeat, I am not the best reviewer of historical fiction, but I'll try. And I start... Plot I need to know the main ...