VivielTwixt

I'm not sure, but I believe it was Orson Scott Card who suggested that aspiring authors should write several short stories to get the autobiographical tendencies out their system. I ...

Writing is the mode in which I explore the human condition. It is how I understand life. I discover the truths of reality through fantasy. A way to express my ...

Thanks everyone for the advice. I'm going to go for it! And I'll keep those transition tips in mind, Dynamo.

I'm writing a fantasy trilogy. The first book is about the parents when they were young adults, about 18 years old. The other two books are about their kids who ...

There is such great imagery here. I can't believe no one's reviewed this yet, but I guess it's because there's not much that can be fixed. I like how it's ...

There's not much I can say on improvements. I agree with the above reviewer. You stuck to your theme and did it well. I liked Mull. In many short stories ...

I think there should be something more to this story than a beautiful woman getting stabbed. Ella's Emerald green eyes stared at the sky. Her skirt was an aqua blue ...

But what people don’t talk about, or even think about, really, is what’s before it. There is no between death. You mean between life and death, or just before death. ...

Interesting poem. It's sort of sweet but also depressing how this guy's only thoughts are his love who seems so far away. The Saturday 6-o'clock alarm sends a piercing shriek ...

Maybe it's because you've shortened it, but I didn't understand the plot of the story. I did get that Skylar was in a space station, but I didn't get the ...

The premise of this story is very interesting. I never read the forced arranged marriage thing done werewolf style. I like the way the story sarts off right in the ...

The story is well-written and the concept is interesting, too. The only thing I would recommend is that you change the second-to-last paragraph to dialogue. That would make a more ...

Liberty handed Ben the waterskin and then stepped back as he tied it to the horse. She silently watched him prepare to leave, wanting to say something that would show ...

Kamari knew there was some sort of catch. As she sat in the palace garden writing the final sentence of her history essay, the sun had just begun to descend. ...

Kamari knew there was some sort of catch. As she sat in the palace garden writing the final sentence of her history essay, the sun had just begun to descend. ...