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Hi again Noelle! I live on the east coast as well! Nice to know I'm not alone. :D About your poem: the thunderous devestation as it traveled farther. devastation Despite ...

Hi Noelle! I haven't been on the site in a long time, but I saw you did a lot of reviews recently so I figured I'd attempt to review one ...

Lauren, Hello! Hope this is helpful: A couple things I noticed: First of all you missed a couple spelling errors which, while minor, were kind of distracting. I terrible friend. ...

Hello, This is likely going to be quick and painless, but if it's not I apologize in advance. I read through this first quickly and didn't notice anything major that ...

Hey Jimmy, So, like I already mentioned, my poetry editing skills are about as good as my poetry writing skills. That is to say, not good. :) So, I'm not ...

*Huggles* Hello, soul-sister! ;) I'm a fellow cheese-stick addict. And lovin' it. Other than the above mentioned, minor things I can't find anything to change. It's completely perfect! ;) Seriously, ...

Hey Iain, Maggie here to do your review! I hope I'm helpful for you! Nit-picks: The dark was deep as black satin Deep as satin? *scratches head* This description doesn't ...

Hey Caitlin! I'll be your reviewer this afternoon! :) Now, for the piece... The day was kind of blah for me. Just an ordinary field trip, nothing special. Never mind, ...

Hello, I'm Maggie! It's nice to meet you! It looks like you're new to the site, so I'll just point out that in general the mods like us to keep ...

Hello again... So this is what you were doing instead of writing that essay? *Shakes finger* Baaaaad. ;) I' terrified of wasted effort, First of all I think you wanted ...

Hey, I'm fairly certain that you don't want a critique on this, but I just wanted to point something out. it walks towards me in a stoic fashion, tail between ...

Hello, I'm Maggie, I'll being reviewing your piece today. :) So first of I'm guessing this is based off the song Goodnight Irene? You might want to mention that at ...

Hello, I'm Maggie, I'll be your reviewer today. :) While reading I did not go line-by-line looking for errors (and actually, I didn't see any, anyway) because it would have ...

Hey, I'm guessing this is the poem you mentioned earlier? I did like the rhyme scheme and the rhythm for the most part, but some stanzas had issues: To whom ...

This seems to be something that would belong in a blog...it's not really an essay, so I don't want to critique it.You bring up some fair points, but I could ...