Virsanity

My Heart; My heart is like any other heart , It can heal, and be torn apart.

Lingering footsteps, a hint of a sigh; Once beautiful whispers, now lukewarm and dry.

lead weights falling from the sky scream to just release my burden hear how loud the voices cry how long does it take to die? how long will i shut ...

My perception of time, Has gone away. And no longer can I, Understand a day. Seconds or years, They're all the same. This truly is making me, Go insane. I ...

I really like this story :) Really find and feel the emotions. It makes me happy right now to enjoy life at its best ^^ tnks!!! Vir

In terms of an inpromptu speech it is good as well as the rhyming. I like the use of the words, and surely when you say this to someone, it's ...

Hello! First of all, i find the song interesting. But in the latter part, there are some redundancies and discrepancies especially on the chorus part. No offense, please don't repeat ...

“Summer” Summer is coming, the sun is shining The weather is hot, we better go swimming Sexy girls at the beach, we better take a glance Or will regret it, ...

I find this poem very interesting... About forbidden desire? Just like the 7 Deadly Sins. Too much desire leads to sin and sin leads to a very deadly consequences. It's ...

I like the way you described teenage life. especially this lines: Melodies woven of petty despairs and shallow depressions, Hopeless ships sunk precisely when predicted. Laughter comes only in comfort

very good ronnie!!! it's a very inspiring poem, keep it up!!! keep writing and dreaming big!!! We will all succeed! :) I remember someone that i care a lot but ...

“Growing Up” Young as we are, older we journey so far Cuddling like a teddy bear, sooner we fear to stare Brittle like the glass, rough like the grass Time ...

The contrast ideas looks fantastic!!! ok, having a Summer in a Storm is very unusual. But, when the poem started, It's like wow! cool! I can see the imagery and ...

Nice imagery! i really like the scenery shown here. It's like a fairytale story of Cinderella. really like this part: "They aren't yellow with joy like the brightest marigold or ...

hi king!!! I should say that about this poem, the content is all about love. We all know that love gives us happiness and courage well, it's part of life. ...