Virgil

I'd love to see a LMS tag as well. I'm not exactly sure if I like the abbreviations of the genres, Young Adult, New Adult, and Middle Grade and I ...

This is super interesting to think about, actually. I've looked up some of it and it may not be completely accurate as you'd probably have to check more than one ...

(n.) the finest piece of thread; a spider's silk woven into your skin and latticed over the cuts on your legs. this is what i hope to be. to be ...

I don't really know why these two have to be cousins. You show no real reason of how it improves the plot of the story rather than if they were ...

I think that something about it would definitely help the pitch/snippet, and yeah, it can still be a medical virus with the side effect of putting the cells in overdrive ...

I'm interested to see what type of virus or 'infection' that this happens to be. I've already been in the universe a little bit seeing from the SBs that you've ...

I think that this could be a little vague? I'm not entirely set on how it reads because it does seem a little forced, but I think that can be ...

I can definitely get behind the fact that things change and your stories may not apply to you anymore. It's like growing out of a beloved band that you used ...

I liked the second idea like SirLight did and I like the sort of freedom that you have with it, the plot being able to be more character-driven and we ...

I don't write as many stories as frequently as I used to, but I love the more dark settings when it comes to writing it. I've always been one to ...

That's quite a pickle. I usually tend to set up context clues when the characters are a lot of the same gender, like them doing something that fits their personality ...

What is Voice: Voice is the style you write in, the personality or background of the speaker. It's the character the poet creates while writing the poem, like the point ...

Following up what Megrim said with the actual story, I have a few comments to carry it on. What type of story are you trying to tell with time travel, ...

I like the idea of the dogs being battle companions and all the like, and I have a few ideas to throw out to you and some suggestions for some ...

I think the whole problem is that you're letting yourself try and stretch stories out to make longer stories. Instead of doing this, write the idea of a story that ...