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Re: a bucolic meadow
Blackberry Spring - Number Five The groundhog's shadow is what tells whether spring is here or if it is not, though the bud of a flower speaks the first day ...
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Re: April Madness 2017
That's okay! I'll just have to find another poem to use, which I surely will have, haha.
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Re: April Madness 2017
Question: Would I be able to use a poem that I wrote on March 31st my time, a couple of hours before April 1st for me for the contest, or ...
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Re: the laws of coming and going
This poem is wonderful. The imagery you use is beautiful and I like the structure and meter that you use for it.
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Re: lizz's lyrical landing
I like this poem a lot because it's so silly, Lizz, and I think that's the best part about it.
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Re: a bucolic meadow
Autumn - Number Four I remember Autumn and how the decayed leaves blanketed the naked earth. Stems interwoven and nooses tied. I woke, late in the evening to the sunshine ...
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Re: a bucolic meadow
wallflower - Number Three are the shy called wallflowers at parties because that is the only place they can truly bloom? in the corner, or on the wall beside a ...
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Re: Drought
I always love these types of poems that use a noun or a word and then elaborate on that word, and it definitely fits your title for this year! The ...
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Re: This Is Not A Poem
I like this! It's short and to the point and I think it works for what it is. It doesn't need to be long to make the reader feel something, ...
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Re: a bucolic meadow
Thanks! And yeah, Masquerade is pretty straightforward. I like the first and third poems so far better than the second because it's just a little simple.
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Re: war-torn, lovestruck
Your poetry is so good and filled with character.
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Re: walk away; recover;
So this was a little weirder than your usual stuff, but I've never read something so lovely that included giraffes and aliens as part of it. As Audy said, it ...
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Re: cocoa hands
That was a lovely poem. I don't get how you write so good off the top of your head--but anyway, the imagery you used was lovely and I love your ...
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Re: Fools!
Nikayla says to @Lumi, "Fam I'd love to go to Taco Bell but like half of their tacos are lettuce and I don't like that fam. Like sometimes I just ...
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Re: #MakeAuthorsGreatAgain!
Thanks Bud, and welcome to YWS!
Apr 1, 2017
