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Virgil

  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a bucolic meadow

    Blackberry Spring - Number Five The groundhog's shadow is what tells whether spring is here or if it is not, though the bud of a flower speaks the first day ...

    Apr 2, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: April Madness 2017

    That's okay! I'll just have to find another poem to use, which I surely will have, haha.

    Apr 2, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: April Madness 2017

    Question: Would I be able to use a poem that I wrote on March 31st my time, a couple of hours before April 1st for me for the contest, or ...

    Apr 2, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: the laws of coming and going

    This poem is wonderful. The imagery you use is beautiful and I like the structure and meter that you use for it.

    Apr 1, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: lizz's lyrical landing

    I like this poem a lot because it's so silly, Lizz, and I think that's the best part about it.

    Apr 1, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a bucolic meadow

    Autumn - Number Four I remember Autumn and how the decayed leaves blanketed the naked earth. Stems interwoven and nooses tied. I woke, late in the evening to the sunshine ...

    Apr 1, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a bucolic meadow

    wallflower - Number Three are the shy called wallflowers at parties because that is the only place they can truly bloom? in the corner, or on the wall beside a ...

    Apr 1, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Drought

    I always love these types of poems that use a noun or a word and then elaborate on that word, and it definitely fits your title for this year! The ...

    Apr 1, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: This Is Not A Poem

    I like this! It's short and to the point and I think it works for what it is. It doesn't need to be long to make the reader feel something, ...

    Apr 1, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a bucolic meadow

    Thanks! And yeah, Masquerade is pretty straightforward. I like the first and third poems so far better than the second because it's just a little simple.

    Apr 1, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: war-torn, lovestruck

    Your poetry is so good and filled with character.

    Apr 1, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: walk away; recover;

    So this was a little weirder than your usual stuff, but I've never read something so lovely that included giraffes and aliens as part of it. As Audy said, it ...

    Apr 1, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: cocoa hands

    That was a lovely poem. I don't get how you write so good off the top of your head--but anyway, the imagery you used was lovely and I love your ...

    Apr 1, 2017
  • Archive Re: Fools!

    Nikayla says to @Lumi, "Fam I'd love to go to Taco Bell but like half of their tacos are lettuce and I don't like that fam. Like sometimes I just ...

    Apr 1, 2017
  • Welcome Mat Re: #MakeAuthorsGreatAgain!

    Thanks Bud, and welcome to YWS!

    Apr 1, 2017


Stories don't end because you stopped paying attention.
— SJ Whitby