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Re: What's Your Favorite Part of April?
Poetry for sure, it's always a nice time since it's spring and the scenery is good for inspiration.
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Re: a bucolic meadow
An Ashen Swan - Number Eleven An ashen swan wades in the lake where thick algae starts to cake. Mosquitoes beside her, striding upon the surface, gazing at the dappled ...
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Re: a bucolic meadow
Jaded - Number Ten The first signs of rain appear: upturned leaves and wet spots manifesting on the sidewalk. Betokening a storm is the low and throaty rumble of thunder, ...
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Re: All I Want To Do Is See You Turn Into A Giant Woman.
Smh Audy your title always has me singing the song and then it just gets stuck for like an hour and it won't come out.
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Re: April Madness 2017
My Submission: Infinitesimal The sea swelled beneath us, as you stood on the precipice of a cliff. Your pant legs were pulled up to your knees, shirt clinging to your ...
Apr 3, 2017 -
Re: [POLL] How long does it take you to write a poem?
It takes me around an hour to write and edit through a poem, though I usually don't have a specific amount of time when I do that type of thing. ...
Apr 3, 2017 -
Re: a bucolic meadow
Thank you!
Apr 3, 2017 -
Re: a bucolic meadow
Usurpant - Number Nine A snake's venom is honey to a criminal, ecstacy at its finest. Dripped from its fangs, the reasons of doing so left subliminal and yet the ...
Apr 3, 2017 -
Re: a bucolic meadow
Icarus - Number Eight Together we sat on that makeshift swingset made from rusted chains, wooden boards, and rope that gave our hands calluses for holding onto them too tightly. ...
Apr 3, 2017 -
Re: you know what is this Discussion
Your first poem was fab, just saying.
Apr 3, 2017 -
Re: a bucolic meadow
Mangrove Forest - Number Seven The lamented trees acted as an umbrella as you stumbled your way through the mangrove forest. Torpid leaves blanketed its floor, blades of grass up ...
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Re: honeymoon vibes
Your poetry is like, exactly what your title is. It gives me vibes of what a honeymoon would be and I like that you kind of have a theme throughout, ...
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Re: gossamer.
Macabre An angel descended down to the ballroom, stuck in a waltz with a macabre figure, who looked as if they came from a tomb, a flask in his back ...
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Re: a bucolic meadow
Infinitesimal - Number Six The sea swelled beneath us, as you stood on the precipice of a cliff. Your pant legs were pulled up to your knees, shirt clinging to ...
Apr 2, 2017 -
Re: a bucolic meadow
Thanks! It means a lot that you liked it and thank you for the kind words. The repetition actually came from the fact that it was a ghazal, which involves ...
Apr 2, 2017
