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Re: How to Deal with the Buzzards Poking at Your Eyes
I knew this was you just from the style it came from in your poetry. Also, you have an acquired way of talking. Also, I like this poem!
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Re: Into the Stars
I like the one you've written about broken memories! I think it perfectly portrays that type of thing and it's a strong piece to go off of. Keep up the ...
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Re: Post Your Picture Here! [10]
@birk I like the new color! Is it long enough to put into a ponytail yet, or nah? That can help out with keeping it out of your face if ...
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Re: a bucolic meadow
I decided to write the epitaph of @Casanova for some odd reason. It just came out of me, and here it is! flask/he loved/the grave - Number Seventeen Aged and ...
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Re: a bucolic meadow
Demeter - Number Sixteen Demeter sauntered with a gentle step upon the verdant fields. Fingertips brushing over the crowns of the thriving harvest. And yeah, maybe the grass will be ...
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Re: a bucolic meadow
Gotta give credit to @Hannah and @Autumns for a few of these lines!
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Re: April Madness 2017
Rydia I'm a little confused with the information? You put Alliyah in one of the rounds and she was against me but congratulated me. [Edit: Don't bother, I read it ...
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Re: a bucolic meadow
Thanks so much!
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Re: Inkstand Musings
Your poetry has a sense of classics to it in that it feels rooted in the old poets, and I like that! I enjoyed the last poem you wrote and ...
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Re: a bucolic meadow
rosewood - Number Fourteen I scrawl down a word at midnight, confined to a rosewood desk. Confined to this lighthouse, guiding ships back to shore; I will Hansel-and-Gretel you back ...
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Re: I'm going to shave a dog and name it Bruce
I really do enjoy the minimalist aspects of your most recent poem and it hits hard even though it's short. Love it for what it is.
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Re: the laws of coming and going
Ugh your poetry is so lovely. I love that last one and especially the lines one through four, it's a great beginning to the piece.
Apr 4, 2017 -
Re: a bucolic meadow
shipwrecked - Number Thirteen we shipwrecked, left to our devices, our vices beginning to show on our sleeves. you wore them, but i hid mine away, tucking them into my ...
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Re: a bucolic meadow
sapphire fireflies - Number Twelve sapphire fireflies animate the night, their gentle blue glow present underneath the moonlight. i rest my chin on the windowsill, desiring to be outside. eyelids ...
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Re: walk away; recover;
Missed your third poem on accident, and wow. You got me. I love that one. Your fourth one plays with a different style, and I like that. It feels more ...
Apr 4, 2017
