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Virgil

  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a bucolic meadow

    Prompt: Find a poem you like, then place your notepad or piece of paper next to the poem and begin line by line going through what the poet has done. ...

    Apr 13, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a bucolic meadow

    Prompt: Jot down the important events from a particular year, for example, the summer of 2002. Freewrite about it, see where it takes you. A Poet's Universe 1/7 Maudlin - ...

    Apr 13, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: evanescence

    I like your last poem and the concepts it plays with! Especially the ending that talks about the jellyfish and how it has no brain and no heart which I ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a tarot spread for nonbelievers

    You haven't brought up cathedrals that much thus far into NaPo! I just wanted to stop by and say that your last poem is so vivid and it's just so ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a girl swallows a lunar eclipse

    I have not been keeping up with you as well as I should be! I liked your last poem and it makes me want to watch Kiki's Delivery Service since ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: I'd hate to think I'm missing out

    I'd hate to think I'm missing out too! I'm going backwards into catching up on your thread and nine is literally soul-crushing and ten is somewhat nostalgic for some reason? ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: traveler with a broken heart

    That last one is quite the powerful piece you have there, and admittedly I think I enjoyed it better than the sequel you wrote to the garden poem because it ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: the entire history of human desire takes 70 minutes to tell

    That last one rocked my socks off. Also, may I ask what's with the numbers in the corner? Is this who you're taking inspiration from or trying to write similar ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a bucolic meadow

    Carcass - Number Thirty-nine I leave the carcass of a watermelon out for the birds, thinking that maybe they'll like it better than I did, attempting to bite into the ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a bucolic meadow

    First line is a prompt provided by the lovely @Alliyah! Miscreant - Number Thirty-eight To save his own life, he would have to kill there was not a hint of ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a bucolic meadow

    Moth-eaten - Number Thirty-seven The headlights of your car mowed down the asphalt road, tire marks left behind with the scenery of this moth-eaten town. Passing by houses that have ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a bucolic meadow

    Hemlock - Number Thirty-six How beautiful the rows of hemlock look in the early morning, when the sun is still climbing mountains to get back to its venue, colors in ...

    Apr 11, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: kintsugi ~ a call to arms

    I like your last poem for the sort of dialogue/monologue it uses in the first stanza as lines and I found that to be used in a unique way. Nice ...

    Apr 11, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a bucolic meadow

    Photograph - Number Thirty-five Recollections of past experiences and events flood the body, a beach where every grain of sand holds a scene, a memory, yet I am the only ...

    Apr 10, 2017
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a bucolic meadow

    Fireplace - Number Thirty-four As you sat close to the fireplace the flames kissed you on the cheek. With warmth and tenderness, the fire cradled your most fragile thoughts. On ...

    Apr 10, 2017


“Sorry about the blood in your mouth. I wish it was mine. I couldn't get the boy to kill me, but I wore his jacket for the longest time.”
— Richard Siken