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Re: Welcome New Members! [3]
Welcome @Aaraju, glad you're enjoying it here so far!
Apr 20, 2017 -
Re: a bucolic meadow
wine in antarctica - Sixty-eight I'll be drinking wine in Antarctica, regardless of where you are, frost covering the top of the glass, I set it down in the perpetual ...
Apr 20, 2017 -
Re: Help with titles
Is it a term in the story, or is it an actual name? I'm going to assume it's more of a term or title since that's what you state. Some ...
Apr 19, 2017 -
Re: a bucolic meadow
@Autumns @ScarlettFire @Apricity from the jam. fluent in//broken hearts//breaking hearts - Number Sixty-seven i am fluent in broken hearts, in misery, almost as if it were my mother tongue. there ...
Apr 19, 2017 -
Re: a bucolic meadow
Prompt: 'stone hearts, bleeding red' gifted by @ScarlettFire in a jam! stone hearts - Number Sixty-six stone hearts, bleeding red. the scent of strawberries in the amorous air.
Apr 19, 2017 -
Re: a bucolic meadow
Thank you! And I don't think I will. :p
Apr 19, 2017 -
Re: I'm new
Welcome to YWS, Quieen! If you have any questions, feel free to ask, and I hope you enjoy it here as I and many others do! ^^
Apr 19, 2017 -
Re: Why do you review?
Reviewing to help others better themselves and their writing is most definitely why I review. I'm not very needy regarding points, and I certainly don't review for them, at least, ...
Apr 18, 2017 -
Re: Does "Show, Don't Tell" Apply to Poetry too?
In ways, it does, and I think in some form it applies to all literature. Showing and not telling in this case, is the difference between showing scenes in a ...
Apr 18, 2017 -
Re: a bucolic meadow
echo - Number Sixty-five i can hear her echo in old home videos that i watch on the television when no one else is home. i can see her dancing ...
Apr 18, 2017 -
Re: a bucolic meadow
fairisle sweater - Number Sixty-four you still wear the mourning on your sleeve, like a fairisle sweater in april. i think of how it embodies your grief, only scraps and ...
Apr 18, 2017 -
Re: a bucolic meadow
vertigo - Number Sixty-three left in vertigo, i steady myself on an oak tree. i wanted to spin like the earth, to see how it felt forever hurdling counter-clockwise, head ...
Apr 18, 2017 -
Re: April Madness 2017
It is done. smile for you [i can't bring it upon myself to taunt your cat with a laser pointer again, now that i know the feeling.] i miss your ...
Apr 17, 2017 -
Re: a bucolic meadow
Jasper - Number Sixty-two gems depraved, poison in their blood. i wanted to take a moment to think of just flexibility, love, and trust, but i can't when these thoughts ...
Apr 17, 2017 -
Re: a bucolic meadow
dishwater - Number Sixty-one i wash the dishes in early morning, sunshine gleaming through the smudged windows, glass delicate as i and as firm as you were. potted plants lined ...
Apr 17, 2017
