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Yeah. What you said makes sense. I think I now what I have to do now. I am just building my story. I'll upload new chapter soon. Thanks for the ...

Hi. Thanks for reviewing. This is my first story but I'll try to make it interesting and meet your hopes. And about short sentences, they are the verbal pictures of ...

Thanks for this correction. Really. I never learned grammar so. I will write this novel, dont worry.