VioletJune

I have to say that this may possibly be my favorite poem of all time on YWS like honestly, I personally loved the way you delivered the story and the ...

I thought this poem had a really nice theme, everything rolled together pretty smoothly and your descriptions were very good, I only had a few things I didn't like, including ...

Ok, so I liked this a lot :) at some points I kinda though, well this seems a little cheesy, but I had to remind myself that it is fantasy ...

I really wish this had been about a little child. . . . I really don't like stories about animal love, I mean don't get me wrong I love animals ...

The only thing I have to say is that you need to CAPITALIZE YOUR I'S! Gah that was very annoying to me haha, other than that I (

Ok! Well I guess I'll be the first to comment :) It's very short, but i think that adds to the point. The only think I would suggest is changing ...

Definitely enjoyed this :) it portrayed a very captivating story and was easy to follow. The only type of reviewing I might suggest would be the coma usage but hey, ...

Oh Katie darling :) lord knows I've been reading your stories FOREVER and you are definitely improving. *throws confetti into air* Yeah, quiet a few typos but we can't win ...

Well, first off that whole beging part ruins the story, now one wants to have everything in the story be set before them, it ruins the surprise. And everytime there's ...

I liked the idea of this story but I would like it MUCH more if you toned down on the big huge descriptive words, I mean I'm all for dabbling ...

So I read all these stories at like two last night and was way to exhausted to leave a comment but I just wanted to let you know they're great! ...

I really liked the idea of this story, it made me laugh. Everyone else pointed out most of your mistakes so I'll just say it needs more development haha, hope ...

Omg! Hehehe this made me sooo happy! I love love love Flyleaf (Yes you got the name of the song wrong but we'll keep that secret!) so when I saw ...

I want more haha if you don't post more I will surely be disappointed because this isn't enough to sustain my interest. I'm not going to point out your typos ...

I don't know why but I have always found stories about anyone considered an adult particularly boring, no offense. This story made me feel tired lol but maybe that was ...