VictoriaIsis

This chapter was really good. I like how you ended it, too. The only mistake I found was "wondered" was misspelled, it's "wander". But that doesn't really matter or effect ...

The ending was really strong, I like this a lot. You have a lot of imagination, as the poem shows, and I can't find any flaws. You did a really ...

Thanks @rainbowcabbit, I realized that I put went twice too, and that just goes to show to always edit before publishing.