Vicky17

I have to say I'd never thought I'd find a poem about Bleach on this site :D First of all, congratulations, it is really really good especially the episode 19 ...

Esmeralda There is no word aside from beauty, To describe one that charms Bewitches, mesmerizes The heart of the purest men. One that even corrupts a man of God, Imploring ...

I thought this poem was amazing. It's well written and I can't find any faults. For some reason I really like the description: 'But there is a place away from ...

Hey! I think this poem is brilliant and I must admit, having read the previous version, the edited one makes a lot more sense. But for some reason, I can't ...

Hi, First thing: I really liked your story! It was great in every sense of the word and I especially like this Hat boy character. You portrayed him as this ...

I really liked your poem, it's so vivid and expresses the emotions felt by someone who self-harms very well. Personally i think it would be good if the title would ...

Hello :D I have to say I really liked your story especially the prologue at the beginning, I think it was very well written. I just wished you described the ...

Those born at the end of an era Look back. Those that look back Can never move forward in this sea Of time. The wind may blow, the clouds may ...

I really like your poem and especially the repetition of what am I at the end. I don't know why but it makes it a bit more childish but in ...

Personally I loved it, probably because I can relate (i'm not sure if it's a literacy piece or it actually happened) to Karen. You also expressed the emotions brilliantly well ...