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Re: R.O.T.C: The Camp!
Chaney thought for a moment, but decided it was only a week...even if she hated it it would be over before too long. "Sure, I'll be squad leader" As Adri ...
Dec 22, 2007 -
Re: Are You Excited About The Young Writers Journal?
:) I'm so excited!
Dec 22, 2007 -
Re: My Art "Lucifer and the Duck"
I love it! The scene is very beautiful. I also like the objects, but I have one issue: you can tell they weren't really in the water. I think the ...
Dec 21, 2007 -
Re: The Artificer's Angel
This is a little too "Lara Croft Tombraider: PC game" for me. The flying man is very, very computer generated....I mean, it shows way too much? The details on the ...
Dec 21, 2007 -
Re: Blue Creek
Name: Logan Haverman Sex: female Age: 24 Appearance: Dirty blonde curls, slender, about 5'3". Not really an "athlete" type...more of a "yoga" type (you know what I mean haha). History: ...
Dec 20, 2007 -
Re: Something Exciting that Happens to Be Untitled
Hmm Hmm? Does it? I love to post. I love it the most. And I know I must boast, About how I love to post, And how I love toast-- ...
Dec 20, 2007 -
Re: R.O.T.C: The Camp!
Chaney only really had one question, and if she liked the answer she would take the position. If not, she would turn it down. "Do I have to yell at ...
Dec 20, 2007 -
Re: R.O.T.C: The Camp!
Chaney slowed down considerably and pulled over to the team bench infront of the bleachers. She paced a little and put her hands on her hips--it's important not to stop ...
Dec 20, 2007 -
Re: R.O.T.C: The Camp!
I posted, Adri...I am not gone!
Dec 20, 2007 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Woo! Welcome back Meep! Missed you ;)
Dec 19, 2007 -
Re: Distant Galaxy Threatened by 'Death-Star'
I saw this today at work! ....on the internet! Haha. This is so crazy. Attack Stars ftw!
Dec 19, 2007 -
Re: Earth Abides
Hi Eva! Welcome to YWS! This is pretty good just looking at it. I would like to see stronger lines, but I always want to see stronger lines. Plus if ...
Dec 19, 2007 -
Re: RiOT! [prologue]
Hi Perf. I'm going to nitpick first, :] The road is deserted, just like the other 32 million streets in Portland, Oregon at 3:17 in the morning. On a dripping ...
Dec 19, 2007 -
Re: A Desperate Chase
Hi Lini. Well, the first thing that sticks out to me is that there is no punctuation...and that just irks me. Commas, semicolons, periods...they are all friends of poets that ...
Dec 19, 2007 -
Re: Lust
Hi Kazie-- I fixed your title, please don't use all caps in the title (or any other funky thing..) Thanks!
Dec 19, 2007
