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Re: asphyxiation
I don't know if I like it or not, either. It's like right in the middle where you could like it but you could just as easily hate it? I ...
Dec 24, 2007 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
9/10 Aww, Wendy!
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]
10/10 I love it! I enjoy avatars with only halfpeople in them. (You may think I'm kidding, but I'm really not lol..look at mine!). :)
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: El' Dorko Art YWS Christmas
Haha that's very cute! Very emo, but still very cute! You should make one actually for YWS with a cute emo dude writing or something and a quote for christmas ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: RiOT! [prologue]
So this might be a fairy tale with a happy ending after all, if the pot lasts long enough. Did you actually mean the pot or did you mean the ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: The Tree of Friendship
Hi Tessia. I have a few suggestions here... [s]To me,[/s] F riendship is [s]like [/s]a vast tree. Whilst you are the trunk, best friends [s]make up for [/s] are the ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Rory Legend
Hi Rory! Welcome to the YWS! Hope you enjoy the site! Feel free to PM any of us in green and we'll be happy to help! Kwaheri, Via
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Glue
Hi Rjjr. Hmm, this is very...odd? To be honest I have no idea whats going on. I think it bounces around too much...you go from ponies to treadmills to ..donkies? ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Her<You<Me
Hi again ANA. I seem to have only one request at a time on your poetry. This format is obnoxious. "Sorry that" is repeated is repeated is repeated is repeated ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: The $70 Soul
Hi ANA. My first and only critique point I have to make right now is scrap this and start over. If your poem needs as much explanation as you have ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Masks
Hmm, hi Lucky. I think this is an okay start to a poem, but it doesn't really have any poetic elements to make it great? There are no similies/metaphors, everything ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here (4)
Haha! The impression is awesome! And the catscan is PRICELESS! Awesome, Raz!
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Guys and Dolls
Well, here is my little update for the past few months! Wrote a few new poems, wrote a few new short stories...I like three of them. I have a short ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Drowning Via IV
I have only one question: Why are you drowning me?
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Blue Creek
Logan was at her second job, which today was only her first. She was allowed a day off at CFS for she was going to take a child she had ...
Dec 22, 2007
