Via

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I like the idea behind this Kim, but it's too flighty really...not enough connecting going on. I start the journey through the grass, Smell flowers and dampness as I go, ...

This a "I'm bored" kind of way. It's really rather pointlessl there is no statement made here. But, I suppose I'll critique it as much as I can anyway... Sun ...

Hi Barbed! Welcome to the YWS! What do you like to write? Feel free to PM me if you need anything and I'll see you around the site! Kwaheri, Via

Twit is known for being twitty but not being twitty. :) (Man this thread grew quick...)

kitty is known for being very chipper :)

I am fixing your title again, for the third time today. Please do not write the title in caps.

The biggest issue (and by biggest I mean it distracting from anything else the poem could possibly hold in it) is that fact that there is no punctuation at all! ...

Hi Cathy-- My biggest problem with this piece is as follows. Read it like this right quick: Is there a reason I am here? What makes me a human, a ...

Hi NS-- Welcome to YWS! I make one request: please take a look at the Rules & Guides before posting anymore work. We do ask that you critique 2 works ...

I really agree with Cade on this one. It's just a list of things you hate...but there really isn't any "life" to the poem--assuming that makes any sense at all. ...

Hi Omar! Welcome to the YWS! We are full of inspiration here :) What fiction genre is your favorite to write? French is a difficult language to learn, more power ...

Hi blacktiger-- I understand what you are getting at on this poem. However, how do I understand it you ask? Because you tell me exactly what is going on in ...

I just fixed your title, second one of yours today. As eye-catching as caps my be please do not use all caps in your title/tagline. Thanks! Now onto the poem... ...

I'll be in Mexico...that's close, right? XD Have fun!