Via

This is short, but it's okay too. I'll see what I can suggest here... I think what is going on is instead of going to the next line you are ...

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Hi Jack! Welcome to the YWS! Glad to have you around. Now onto the poem... I actually really like this! It shows some definite potential and often times that's hard ...

Via turned as her name was shouted to see a welcoming face of a friend, "Melj!" She chuckled as Amelia came towards them, "Welcome to the new YWS: Youth Without ...

Ah! *pretends to have remembered and writes it now*

Well, one problem here that will overrule anything else wrong with it is that there is no punctuation! When you have a poem with no punctuation the entire thing is ...

*Throws up hands* I agree with all said above! The biggest problem with this poem is this poem! How odd, eh? We all appreciate the description, and there is a ...

my eyes go to you and how you look at me.

This is a book of poems, actually. Hecht is one of my favorite poets! Everything is very cynical and very off the wall. It's kind of hard to follow because ...

The bedroom: I understand it, indeed. But it's definitely needs some shading in other places besides under the window. Also...darker lines! If you like doing light lines, that's fine...but when ...

Very cute! Hehe! The car looks like it was taken off the net? Did you do it or is it a copy? Haha you should have done a minivan....:) Very ...

Hehehe very cute! They definitely need a background though...maybe green or brown (pasture or mud pile, aka) :) They look like they are looking up so whatever it is it ...

Hi Myrr-- I think the biggest issue with this is that there is no punctuation...the second one that there are no capitals (but punctuation is by far more important). Without ...

Wow. That's...a lot of a statue :) What are these for? Anything particular? Hehe. They are all pretty good! My favorites are 1 and 4. 1: It's the closest close ...

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