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Re: Hi everyone! I'm new
Hi Keira! Welcome to the YWS! I love your avatar ;) What do you like to write? What do you like to listen too? Hope you enjoy the site! Feel ...
Feb 1, 2008 -
Re: City Council Passes Motions Criticizing Marines Office
I thought it was "don't ask, don't tell"? *shrug*
Feb 1, 2008 -
Re: Lilac
Hi Night-- Welcome to YWS! Please take a look at the Rules & Guides . We do ask that you do two reviews of others work before posting every one ...
Feb 1, 2008 -
Re: Sucked into YWS
Via shook her head, "But then Nate couldn't log on and we might never get out." Geeze this is one weird dream , Via thought to herself and turned to ...
Feb 1, 2008 -
Re: What We Are (title change?)
Hello Idering-- I think I have told you this before, but just incase I haven't I'll repeat myself: You have to have punctuation in a poem like this. Without it ...
Feb 1, 2008 -
Re: My Doggies!
...there are no pictures?
Feb 1, 2008 -
Re: Portrait photography
These are pretty good! I really like them. They are very artistic. I really like the black and white one especially (and especially the first one) because their faces are ...
Feb 1, 2008 -
Re: Cherished Memories
Hello peter-- Welcome to the YWS! Please take a look at the Rules & Guides . We do ask that you make 2 critiques/reviews of others work before posting every ...
Jan 31, 2008 -
Re: Is homosexuality a psychological disorder or is it inate?
No. No, it's not a psychological disorder. No. If it were, then heterosexuality would be a psychological disorder. So, unless sexual preference is based upon one of three psychological disorders ...
Jan 31, 2008 -
Re: Flocked Meadow
These are pretty good! They are very...bright haha. I would suggest come close ups of particular trees and branches and such as well. Possibly, as Adam said, crop the bottom? ...
Jan 31, 2008 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
8/10 Haha, kind of funny!
Jan 30, 2008 -
Re: My Mime
Hi souldier-- Well, this is kind of awkward. I severely missing the point if there is one, why should we care about someone abusing a mime? And why a mime? ...
Jan 30, 2008 -
Re: It Might Not be Colorful, But At Least it'd be Real
Hey Blank! Well, it looks like Suzanne has pretty much tackled this already. I really don't have much to add, unfortunately. But, I'll try anyway! :] I have to agree ...
Jan 30, 2008 -
Re: I hate...
I think everything that is wrong with this poem can be fixed if you honour one code of poetry: Do not start every line (or even several lines in a ...
Jan 30, 2008 -
Re: Trail Mix
Actually I quite like this. It's short (and the fact that I like that is incredibly odd) yet to the point. I think, though that the last line should be ...
Jan 30, 2008
