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Re: Danvers High
Name: Seven Age: Seventeen Race: Witch (light mostly, dark on occasion) Gender: Female Appearance: Dark brown hair, big curls naturally. Crystal blue eyes, olive complexion. About 5'4", skinny but not
Feb 5, 2008 -
Re: Personality check
:) These are the fun times. Silent acts of kindness. Have another character see him do something good without him knowing it. Seriously, that's the winner! That way he can ...
Feb 5, 2008 -
Re: Waiting
Hi Weather-- I have two great suggestions here that will drastically change your poem in a great way: 1. Use punctuation in more than just the last stanza. Seriously, use ...
Feb 5, 2008 -
Re: The Park Bench
Hi lakegirls-- My biggest and really only pet peeve of this is that it isn't poetry. It's kind of hinted on being prose poetry, but really what it sounds like ...
Feb 5, 2008 -
Re: Superbowl Tourists shot outside hotel
That is very scary! You bes be careful! But, why? That's so random...
Feb 5, 2008 -
Re: Newbie
Hi Mal! Welcome to the YWS! I'm not much for manga at all, but I love me some poetry! I hope you enjoy the site and I hope to see ...
Feb 4, 2008 -
Re: fantasy
It was a stanza by stanza thing, but you've changed quite a bit of it and it has helped a lot! A few things are still iffy though: In the ...
Feb 4, 2008 -
Re: Site Bug
I got the same error you did [s]Clau[/s] Suzanne. It signed me out twice today as well saying I was a guest but I do keep my password on 'remember ...
Feb 4, 2008 -
Re: Keala University
Chan raised her hand playfully, "Art major, surprise!" Afterall, she was making a clay pot when they met. She glanced over to Tylor who seemed to be in his own ...
Feb 4, 2008 -
Re: Sucked into YWS
Via laughed, "It's funny that you think my college cares. Some kid has probably stolen my laptop by no---" She got cut off. Suddenly she couldn't keep her balance, it ...
Feb 4, 2008 -
Re: Sucked into YWS
[....you reposted my post...lol]
Feb 4, 2008 -
Re: Sucked into YWS
Via went with kitty15 and FireArris through the rooms shaking her head, "Why do we always have to have aliens?" She kind of chuckled, "I think they just follow Grif ...
Feb 4, 2008 -
Re: Well, Here I Am.
Hi Matto! Welcome to the YWS! Just FYI: I see your name and I think "Matto, Motto, Ello Moto" so everytime I see you I'm just going to say Ello ...
Feb 4, 2008 -
Re: Sucked into YWS
Via had been seperated from the others in the chaos and was now running around aimlessly. Admittedly, she wasn't exactly paying attention to what was infront of her. She was ...
Feb 4, 2008 -
Re: Movies You've Gone to the Theater to See Recently
27 Dresses. Very cute! :) I'm going to see Fool's Gold this weekend me thinks!
Feb 4, 2008
