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I think you need to be more descriptive. It's just kind of "he did this, and they did that, and then they went here, and did that". You go through ...

It's just kind of....boring. Like previously stated...it's cliche. It's just so...blah. I almost feel like I've read this exact thing somewhere else. [But...this is the hard part of poetry: being ...

I really really really do like this poem. Like Brad said, it's awesome that it has some meaning out of the norm for this site. However...I have a small problem ...

Again, I have to agree with the harsh Brad. Although I feel like a jerk when I do that haha. I feel like....well like this is an email that you ...

Even if your life seems perfect, The battle is not done. For the war to lead a carefree life Is a fight the can't be won. YOUR? You went from ...

Unfortunately, I have to agree with Brad on this one. On some points, anyway. It's a nice thought. Really, it is. But guess what... everyone has this thought. It's boring, ...

he's right, actually. very good. it's hard to find something wrong with it! haha. great job.

I have! I love Alice Sebold. If you haven't already....I suggest you read "Lucky" as well. It's nonfiction, but just as inspiring to anyone that can relate to anything in ...

I agree with the above reply....your poem is kind of all over the place. It's nice to leave things a little untied so the reader can make what they will ...

I absolutely looove the personification of lonely. It's awesome. And it's a topic that many and most can relate to. It's great. Great job!

So hey! I was told to introduce myself in here i am! My name is Meg, i'm eighteen years old, in college, a writer [obviously], in the US in a ...

You live like a thousand mirrors make no difference – That is definitely my favorite line in the entire poem. I think it makes the most sense of them all. ...

thank you for the feedback! I actually agree with that line...I have changed it like ten times since i wrote it...i can't figure out how to make it sound right. ...

I really really do like this. It does touch many people to read it...this seems to be something that happens to most everyone during at some point in their lives. ...

I think I get what it is you are trying to portray through this writing...but I'm fairly certain it doesn't happen within the poem. I, as well, am not quite ...