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Unfortunately, no...you really don't pick that up. It's obvious that the poem is about a photograph, because of the title [this is why they make those things] but the poem ...

Granted, but you will be dead during these 5 million hours of 'not sleeping-sleep'. [..you walked right into that one haha] I wish more than three people would participate in ...

Granted, but you write so much like Snoink that he sues you for plagarism and wins 100 million dollars from you. I wish I had a the guts to be ...

Granted, but tomorrow she will get into a horrible accident and suffer life-long amnesia. wow. that sucks. its sad...i'm sorry. this corruption thing is evil haha. I wish I had ...

Granted, but you will never again speak any language other than Spanish. I wish for a pony.

Granted, but the naughtiness will just move to chapter 55. I wish I wasn't allergic to tomatoes.

granted, but you are a skeleton zombie and nothing stays in you, so you get no satisfaction. I wish that I wasn't bored.

Granted, but you will not procrastinate with something else. I wish this game would help me with my story.

Check out DeVry University Online. I don't know much about their programs... but if you go to you can look up the stats on Ave ACT, Ave GPA, Ave SAT ...

Granted, but it is because you failed out. I wish I could post on this forum without someone else posting while I'm in the process. [/i]

Granted, but noone else will ever beable to read it. I wish I lived in a warm state.

You can fight for your country Make your neighbours proud, Go and win them over, The war you have found . On this well as the last..."Proud" and "Found" just ...

This is by far better than anything you have posted. But the imagery is not appealing, the repetition is too much for a poem with so many short stanzas...there is ...

Mm I have to agree with the confusing last line. And the line "the moment is the future"...I feel like you were just trying to find something to fill in ...

This, although I understand what you are talking about, is very very hard to read. There are just too many large words one after another--try reading it aloud to yourself...it's ...