Via

I have to agree with Rei. The flow is fine; for the most part it's understandable. But there just isn't anything spectacular here that makes me want to read it ...

I think the general consensus with writers like this is that all great writers went to an ivy league school. This is so untrue though...and a lot of celebrities are ...

I'd have to agree with Snoink on that. Or maybe he had a band in highschool and played the guitar??

"Move to this God-forsaken island."-Val "I don't really think this is appropriate."-Annah "Noone really ever forced me to do anything, I just did what I thought was the right thing ...

5/10. It's cool looking....but I have no idea what it is?

Thank you! This was just one of the unusual school papers that was enjoyable to write! Meg

"Yea, right. Santa doesn't come here."-Val "Haha sure. At the mall." -Annah "I do for my kids." -Cole What do you want for Christmas?

I, and I say this everytime I crit such a poem, am not a fan of short poems. So I often don't have much to say to them. But, I ...

"Always. Especially on rainy days. But we don't get many of those our here." -Val What is you favorite kind of ice cream?

Haha sure. I actually did this for a class my senior year and my teacher, who had read the poem, wrote up a list of guidelines for writing our pieces. ...

I liked this as well! You've impressed me....this may be the best thing you have posted yet! I also second, or third, or fourth....the flow issue. But I guess I ...

I do agree with it being cliche', but what else is knew! haha. But also the content is a little shaky here. It starts out ver good, and then the ...

Through his eyes the world is perfect. Everything is in its place, Nothing deserves a second thought. Through his eyes the stars sparkle in the night. The moonlight filters in ...

I like the idea here. However, besides the first two lines and the last two lines--which happen to be the same--there is no poetry. These are paragraphs. My advice would ...

It is very short. Personally, I do not have a particular liking for poems of this length--but I'll take this into context anywho. First, disappear--not disapear. And for the small ...