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It's a nice thought, really, but it needs to be carried out--there is no ending, it just kind of stops. I would reconsider your linebreaks here...they are often awkward. The ...

You always impress me with your writing. I rarely have anything to say to better them. You have a lot of talent. You should consider mentoring. Really. Keep it up. ...

Larry cursed those damnable winged leeches. Whose idea had that been, anyway? Probably that wizards. Larry (or was it Gary? or Harry? he could never remember...) was going to kill ...

I'd have to agree...being able to see each others faces while we chat. Having chat room with like 12 different pictures up on our screen at once, being able to ...

Hey! Welcome to the YWS! I'm Meg, I'm a poetry mod [naturally, I also write it] and write fiction! What do you write? Anyway, enjoy the site and I look ...

Pretty good photography! But, agreed that the oddness is made with the fact that it's your sister [even though you are female..still odd haha].

I have to agree with griffinkeeper. As far as I know, flamingo's do not have four legs, have lips or live in the desert...which kind of makes the analogy pointless ...

This is from "Whose Line is it Anyway?". On the show, they play a game where they can only speak in song titles. Here, we will do the same thing. ...

I have a tattoo like that :wink: But...its not on my shoulder.

6/10 A little stalkerish in a sweet way...I suppose haha. But i'm not much for sigs you have to click a link to see =/

I have to agree that this is a very impressive prologue. However, now you've built the story up to be amazing--so it better be or the reader will be very ...

Boys: This particular thread is not the place to have this 'discussion'. Brad has actually started a thread for this exact reason, please take your argument there or continue over ...

I don't think you will sell many copies that way. Most people aren't going to buy something they have no idea what is.

I doubt he was being serious when he made that quote, hence 'jokingly'. I mean, just think about it. Do you want the entire world watching you die? Um...creepy. And ...

I admire his devotion to his beliefs. But, there are better ways to protest than to set yourself on fire. Furthermore, if you kill yourself how is that supposed to ...