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Welcome to the YWS! What do you like to write? I am also big on drawing fact I have a hard time doing much else [other than small nothings that ...

10/10 Way to be patriotic. Sadly, ten bucks says that flag was made in China.

"Sleeps with Butterflies" -Tori Amos

5/10 For actually the same reason you said...I'm not a big Potter fan. :?

...that a grasshopper would hop on top of him before he could get away from Arnold. Larry remembered the machine used in "Honey I Shrunk the Kids" and attempted to ...

Lyk 4 reel. I lyk totly spent a hole 2 hr on herre last nite crittin some lonly poems. Spew is lyk, totly taken ova. :wink:

7/10 Kind of weird. But it's what I think of my friends sometimes when I'm trying to listen to them lol.

Actually, this is not horrible! I like the style...it's a lot more non-meloncholy than most pieces we tend to find here on the YWS, even though it is talking about ...

I would say this isn't bad , persay. It just isn't poetry. It's really just a whole bunch of questions thrown in a row. There aren't any poetic elements involved ...

"Any day not here." -Val "I'm still waiting for it." -Annah "The day I moved back home." -Cole Pen: blue, black, or some other random color ink?

Not poetry. *moved*

This is not poetry dear. Please read the rules before posting any further. -moved-

Hello Elise! Welcome to YWS! I also write poetry and fiction, so I look forward to seeing your work around the site! PM me if you have any questions or ...

It's not bad. But...of course I have a few things to say. First, the beginning is very stringy. Really...like string cheese, just kind of falling apart. It starts to get ...

Loved it; especially the allusions. Thank you for not jumping around with your allusions and just sticking with Bible references....people drive me nuts when they flop between four different things ...